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I just finished the Bright Hour. I decided I need something light so I picked 50 Shades of Grey. I’m in chapter 1, it gets better right?

I just finished the Bright Hour. I decided I need something light so I picked 50 Shades of Grey. I’m in chapter 1, it gets better right?

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Rachel

I think the books are among the worst book ever written… so cringe worthy and repetitive. That’s just my opinion tho!

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KrystalQuestion author

It’s basically freshman in high school writing at best.

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Cassandra

No

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Lisa

No

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Meghan

Nope.

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Jo

Nope. I made the mistake of buying the set, didn’t even finish the first one ?

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Amber

No. No it does not. Unless you condone mentally, emotionally, and physically abusive relationships disguised as a piss poor excuse for BDSM. Or writing worse than the level of that of a middle schooler.

It began as a twilight fanfiction. The author changed some names, a location, a detail here and there. And with basically zero editing she self-published it. Then she up and completely. Opied the exact thing Meyer was gonna do with twilight, ie write it from Edward’s point of view (she didn’t because some ass leaked a copy of some of her work and she likes to cut off her nose to spite her face). So you have horrendous writing, you have, essentially, an abusive relationship…..no, there’s nothing to even kinda like about those books.

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Andrea

No, just throw it away

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Tahlia

I read all three and I can confirm they do not get better haha I kept reading because I wanted to see what happened but they are really not good.

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Janine

No it’s utter trash

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Fiona

I wasnt a lover of the first but the second and third had a better plot line .. couldn’t not read the collection when it was “all talk” amongst friends x

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William

No, it’s crap.

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Colleen

Lol the writing does not- the story is more bearable if you’re in the right “mood” lol.

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Jackie

I read the books and watched the movies.

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Candice

Yes it does. Don’t take the opinion of others on this book ..

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Tracy

No!!! It’s total rubbish! Didn’t finish the first one and never bothered with the others. Only read it because of the hype! Give the author her due, she has done very well out of these books. I think most people bought due to the hype and probably never read them all ?. Jeez! ?

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Stacy

Yes! Loved those books! It is a great romance story!

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Candice

Oh so there’s 2 people in this group (me and you) who actually loved them! Cool!!

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Fiona

Think my problem with the first one was i had saw the film first and the actors were cringy and had no chemistry x

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Candice

I just don’t understand all the hate in this group about this book! I would never bash a book like that!

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Stacy

@Fiona the casting was beyond terrible. The movies are horrific. The book really is a nice love story.

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Fiona

@Stacy .. everytime he said “laters baby” i wanted to kill him ?

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Tracy

@Candice I wouldn’t say it’s hate, hate is a very strong word! There are a few books I have read that I really didn’t like and would say so if asked otherwise what’s the point in asking for an opinion. I have a few girlfriends that liked these books but mainly for the sexy bits, most said the story writing was terrible. ?

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Candice

@Tracy so is ‘awful’ ‘horrible’ ‘ trash’ etc…

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Liz

Er no – I did get through all 3 books but I’m very stubborn!!

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Miranda

No but I also did read all 3 books.. out of curiosity mainly!

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Miranda

(I then read the fourth – Grey and can confirm it wasn’t any better either )

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Melissa

I loved 50 shades

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Josepha

The worse books I ever started and never finished

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Esti

No

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Sara

I wish there was a scale that you could see if others read similar books to you. Then you would know. However I could not get over the childish writing of this author. That being said, I could not get through book 1.

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Meredith

No

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Pauline

No

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Lauren

Nope. Like very bad porn…… and porn is cringy

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Cindy

Nope.

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Colleen

Also just be aware that it is NOT some bdsm bible and there are much better resources out there that actually discuss safe/ethical kink … but enjoying some trash lit isn’t going to hurt anyone of you know what it actually is and is not.

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Tammy

No it was a terrible book

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Candice

So have you all wrote a book?

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Danielle

Yes some of us have.

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Candice

Published and all? Many fans of these books?

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Rebecca

Everyone is entitled to an opinion….
Personally I think they are awful, however if you enjoy them then read away!

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Danielle

I don’t know what difference it makes as to whether someone has written a book or not. They still have just as much entitlement to an opinion, and that opinion carries as much weight as anyone else, author or not. I think these books are appalling. Terribly written and promoting abuse as normal behaviour. If that’s what you like though go ahead and read it. As a group we were asked for our opinions on it so that’s what people have given.

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Candice

Because you all are bashing an author. Saying her writing is crap. That’s not right. If you don’t like it then say it. You don’t have to bash her writing. I bet if all of you who “hated” these books so much ,would get offended if someone said that about your book. I agree that everyone has an opinion but to use words such has terrible, awful, etc is ridiculous

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Sandy

But what if there are a lot of spelling errors, poor grammar, content dissonance, repetitive sentences and on and on? Wouldn’t these things qualify as terrible writing?

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Candice

@Sandy yes but why say that? That’s just rude.

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Danielle

I’m not sure you know how literary criticism works. Saying a book is badly written is very different to bashing an author. Nobody is insulting her personally. We are commenting on the writing she produces. It’s not rude, it’s stating an opinion on a piece of writing.

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Sandy

Many people don’t like a book because of subject material or because they didn’t like the characters. I appreciate it when people, without giving away the entire story, clearly say why they don’t like a book. Just saying they didn’t like it doesn’t tell me very much. But if someone tells me that the story has lots of spelling and grammatical errors , that is different. We’re looking at two types of comments here, some subjective and some objective- both valid when backed up.

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Jay

You don’t have to be an artist to appreciate art x

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Jessica

No

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Koerner

No.

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Fiona

Maybe a poll would have been better?x

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Susan

No

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Amanda

No. It’s awful:(

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Janey

Unfortunately not – I read three!? And they are not good x

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Jackie

Is that why you read all three?

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Janey

@Jackie I’m just nosey and wanted to see what happened but they’re really not good – I wouldn’t recommend!

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Claire

Nope

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Jessa

does the writing get better? Nah, but is it readable, yes. Just don’t use it as a how to guide for your bdsm relationship and you’ll be fine

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Tracy

It’s abominable

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Jenni

Noooo

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Jodi

Save your precious reading hours and read something else

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Cindy

Yes

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Carol

No!

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Kayla

I love all three books.

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Danielle

No. It’s atrocious writing glorifying abuse. Move on to something worth reading.

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Louise

No, it’s one of the worst books I have ever read. In terms of both writing and subject matter.

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Kim

Nope. Move on to something else.

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Janet

No. It doesn’t.

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Ruth

It actually gets worse!

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Madi

NO. worst writing I’ve ever experienced. I found myself shocked so many times at how bad it is. Save yourself the pain and just watch the movies

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Lyn

Sadly it’s awful. Badly written throughout.

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Tamara

No. In fact, I do believe many scenes were ‘copy-paste’.

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Janette

Awful book

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Dawn

Nope!

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Patricia

No!

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Alena

i wouldn’t consider fifty shades light at all and no I felt the series gets worse but that’s my opinion. I never finished the second book I finished the first because I had no other books at the time.

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Kelly

Nope

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Lauren

Awful awful awful

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Althea

Nope. Horrible book

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Jane

Ditto the above! Give up now – you’ll never regret it!

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Marie

Awful

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Kit

No

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Cara

No, I never could get into it.

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Susan

Nope

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Deborah

If you read all the books, it has a good story if you can get past all the sex. Lol

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Elke

no bad writing

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Liz

Trash

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Debby

Unless you want to say you’ve read it, choose something else. It’s terrible.

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Nicole

I just love these responses

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Patsy

Pretty much the same ole same ole.

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Elaine

No

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Sharon

Noooo so dumb

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Jackie

It’s a great read it’s not all about sex. There is a story on how Christian got rich.

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Genie

No worse

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Robin

i wouldn’t count on it. I heard the writing was pretty bad and it just sold because of the soft-porn appeal.

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Shelby

I read about half way through the first book, and couldn’t stand it…

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Claire

I loved them . The actual love story between the 2 characters was sweet. And the sex didn’t bother me at all ???

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Candice

Same

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Becky

No

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Jennifer

Yes!

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M

I liked the characters. ..I think maybe the 2nd book was the best…

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Sharla

Don’t do it

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Kate

Nope

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Julie

Could not get into it. So badly written.

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Josey

Nope

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Paula

It gets worse

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Clare

Everyone hates them. So much that no one has read them and the author hasn’t made a SHEDLOAD of money from these books, that no one has read past the first chapter because they are SO awful ?

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Kit

At least I borrowed one to try and didn’t contribute financially ☺️?

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Claire

I know it’s weird isn’t it ?? I honestly don’t mind admitting I loved them. My guilty pleasure at the time lol

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Susan

I read all of them, well never finished the last one….yes, author made a shit load of money. But badly written, boring story line…..why I read them was to see what all the hype was….a waste of my time.

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Stephanie

Bought them, read 10 pages, rolled my eyes so often probably caused damages (?) and sold it to a friend…

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Lynn

No. Only got a few pages in…poorly written.

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Hayley

Nope.

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Barbara

Nope

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Carolyn

I agree.

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Adeline

Noooo!

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Kym

Nope!

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Rochelle

Honestly the first one was kind of slow but the books get better in the second and third

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Lori

Definitely worse, not better

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Nikki

It’s so awful. On so many levels.

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Cassiek

Personally, I think it is pretty lame and shallow, never saw what people liked about it.

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Jennifer

I loved it. Read 3 of the series. There’s no shame to my game. Apparently, lots of people loved it. Author made millions on the book and movies!

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Candice

♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Denise

Nah!

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Estelle

If I wanted to read porn there’s better stuff for free on line. Even the BDSM community felt the need to come out and say that how it portrayed in the book is Abuse! And is not how a relationship should ever be handled.

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